Research Question: What are the characteristic of the ancient west african empires?
Thesis: Ancient west African kingdoms of Ghana Mali and song that were fascinating because of their training caravans, their rulers and government and their crafts and culture.
- Topic Sentence #1: The west African kingdoms used to Camel caravans to bring trade and wealth to the kingdoms.
- Topic Sentence #2: The kingdoms where rich and smart because they were one of the first people in Africa do have a government and tax there were also brought great military advantages to the kingdoms because they had iron and it had a tax system.
- Topic Sentence #3: Last but not least there is beautiful artwork which they use as a special connection because they believe god sent art to them.
Works Cited
“’Ancient Africa for Kids: Empire of Ancient Ghana.’” Ducksters. N.p.: Technological Solutions, Inc.., 2015. Ducksters. Web. 9 Apr. 2015.
Erika Smith. “African pottery – Museum of Natural History – Washington.” Flickr. Web. 9 Apr. 2015.
Ghana, Mali, Songhay. New Jersey: Dillon, 1996. Print.
Klovovi. “Mask from West Africa.” Flickr. N.p., n.d. Web. 9 Apr. 2015.
Pascal. “Matrix Spider.” Flickr. Web. 13 Apr. 2015.
Pennington, Scott. “Studying Africa through the Social Studies.” History of Africa during the time of the great West African kingdoms-Expan. Exploring Africa. Web. 26 Mar. 2015.
Quigley, Mary. Ancient West African Kingdoms: Ghana, Mali, and Songhai. Chicago, Illinois: Heinemann Library, 2013. Print.
Sherrow, Victoria, and James Denbow. Ancient Africa. 52 vols. Washington, DC: National Geographic, 1999. Print.
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